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Open another bottle of cheap wine
Just turned 21 and doin fine
And it's true I've been getting high
But it's just to pass the days
Do you really think I'm addicted
But I'm still doing just fine

And yes I almost lost my job
And I'll waste money when It's tite
Just so I can go out and party
But I'll never remember the night
Every one I know lives at this pace
So really I'm doing just fine

Why should I clean out my closet
When theres a good door to close
Really I don't know who I am yet
Don't really know my friends yet
Don't you think I'm doing fine
So really I'm doing just fine
©2005-2009 ~dieingchild
:icondieingchild:

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I wrote this last spring. I think It's still valid for my life.

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:icondavidangwolf:
Nicely done!

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Girls cold, friends grow old, and we all lose our charms in the end.
:iconslayerstephi:
How many really know who they are at this point in life? Good poem.

--
"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconsophy:
Are you doing fine? :hug:

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"This is not real. And the real world lies someplace else."

:rose:

Blade Runner :heart:
:icondieingchild:
I'm doing the best I can be anyway

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Now certified dangerously insane by the Bell Isle Institute

Satellite from days of old, lead me to your access code.
:icondieingchild:
My sister belives she does, but she compares herself to others and judges people by how she lives. So she clearly lives by unrealistic standards.

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Now certified dangerously insane by the Bell Isle Institute

Satellite from days of old, lead me to your access code.
:iconslayerstephi:
Yeah.

--
"A bird may love a fish, segnore...but where would they live?"
"Then I shall have to make you wings."

>^..^<
:iconsophy:
:hug: I'm glad to hear that.

--
"This is not real. And the real world lies someplace else."

:rose:

Blade Runner :heart:
:iconwonch:
Amazing! :3 Choice composition. Keep up the good work :wave: :eyepopping:

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I am wonch. I wish you peace and love, friend.

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